Your thoughts on a pre-order landing page?

I'll be launching a crowd-funding campaign through our website in about a month, and am currently working on developing the landing page for the site. It's about 90% finished, all that's left are some copy tweaks, responsiveness, and adding in a video along with some product photography.
I would love to get your feedback on the website as it stands, whether positive or negative. The more critical, the better!
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