Are launching pages most important for a startup?

I been wanting to do this for a long time so I jumped into it and hope it all turns out good!

What do you guys think of my launching page? http://ift.tt/1MSg82z

I haven't released it yet just want some feedback and thoughts from my fellow redditors.

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